1)added WIDESCREEN COLLECTION to edition as seen on the front cover.
2) in 1st line of 1st paragraph changed this (John Travolta) to this ('John Travolta') to show it is bold.
3) in 1st line of 1st paragraph changed this (Lisa Kudrow) to this ('Lisa Kudrow') to show it is bold.
4) in the 1st & 2nd lines of the 1st paragraph changed this ... "high-energy comedy team" (David Sheehan, CBS-TV) ... to this ... "'high-energy comedy team'"* ... to show that this statement is bold and that there is a footnote about it.
5) in the 1st line of the 2nd paragraph changed this ... "is truly irresistible" (Sandie Newton, CBS-TV) ... to this ... "'is truly irresistible'"** ... to show that this statement is bold and that there is a footnote about it.
6) in the 5th line of the 2nd paragraph changed this (scheme -- and) to this (scheme – and) to make it more closely match the cover.
7) in the 6th line of the 2nd paragraph changed this ... Kudrow ... to this ... ('Lisa Kudrow') ... to match what is on cover and show that it is bold.
8) in the 6th line of the 2nd paragraph changed this (-- the) to this (– the) to make it more closely match the cover.
9) in the 6th line of the 2nd paragraph changed this (girl -- and) to this (girl – and) to make it more closely match the cover.
10) in the 7th line of the 2nd paragraph changed this ... (Tim Roth) ... to this ... ('Tim Roth') to show that his name is bold.
11) in the 1st line of the 3rd paragraph changed this (Nora Ephron) to this ('Nora Ephron') to show the name as bold.
12) in the 1st line of the 3rd paragraph changed this (Sleepless in Seattle, You've Got Mail) to this ('Sleepless in Seattle', 'You've Got Mail') to show the films are italicized.
13) in the 2nd line in the 3rd paragraph changed this (Ed O'Neill, Michael Rapaport and Bill Pullman) to this ('Ed O'Neill', 'Michael Rapaport' and 'Bill Pullman') to show that the names are bold.
14) in the last line of the 3rd paragraph changed this (Lucky Numbers) to this ('Lucky Numbers') to show it is italicized.
15) added footnotes to coincide with (*) and (**) added above.
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*Updated Notes*
added WIDESCREEN COLLECTION to edition as seen on cover.
in 1st line of 1st paragraph added (') around names to show them as bold.
in the 1st & 2nd lines of the 1st paragraph changed to this ... "'high-energy comedy team'"* ... to show that this statement is bold and that there is a footnote about it.
in the 1st line of the 2nd paragraph changed to this ... "'is truly irresistible'"** ... to show that this staement is bold and that there is a footnote about it.
changed this (scheme -- and) to this (scheme – and) to make it more closely match the cover.
changed this ... Kudrow ... to this ... ('Lisa Kudrow') ... to match what is on cover and show that it is bold.
changed this (-- the) to this (– the) to make it more closely match the cover.
changed this (girl -- and) to this (girl – and) to make it more closely match the cover.
changed this ... (Tim Roth) ... to this ... ('Tim Roth') to show that his name is bold.
changed this (Nora Ephron) to this ('Nora Ephron') to show the name as
Profile Contribution Approved Jan 24 2008 12:13PM