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Need grammatical help from a native english speaker
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DVD Profiler Unlimited RegistrantStar ContributorSpaceFreakMicha
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Well, I thought I could get help on tumblr and twitter where I follow (and being followed) young writers, but no one seems to care. Time to ask the loyal movie freaks who never disappoint... 

I wrote a little haiku but I'm not sure which second verse is correct or "better" english:

Marvellous blossoms
a) you form with every year OR b) you are carrying each year
and sweeter fruits, too

Thanks in advance!
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a)
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Thanks mediadogg, much appreciated! 
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I agree with mediadogg...the grammar with a) is better
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But Micha, remember: You can write about parkways and flowers, but don't try to appreciate women in your poems, because that's sexist!



(For those who didn't get that "joke": https://www.thelocal.de/20180124/berlin-university-outrages-artist-by-erasing-his-poetry-over-sexism-allegation)
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DVD Profiler Unlimited RegistrantStar ContributorSpaceFreakMicha
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Thanks  Eagle & DJ Doena!

And Doena: Did I write about a woman? Or a tree? 
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Quoting DJ Doena:
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(For those who didn't get that "joke": https://www.thelocal.de/20180124/berlin-university-outrages-artist-by-erasing-his-poetry-over-sexism-allegation)


Copying the web address works, clicking the link does not.
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